Your thoughts...

[Seedy]

Hello, I am interested to know your thoughts. I hope this thread doesn't seem too informal or vain, but at this point in the writing game, rejection has become one of my closest friends. Don't try and hide what you really think. I love and need all responses, good or bad. Thank you for your consideration. See link to my book below.


http://conterrif.blogspot.com/

Sincerely,
Seedy

[Jaqhama]

I can understand why you're being rejected, there are too many glaring errors in your writing.

You need a proof reader who knows their grammer structure and spelling.

As an example I copied this from your story:

Following the barrels, Wishop watched several long weapons crates full of crossbows, bolts, glaives, poleaxes, and spears be set on bored.

Should read: Following the barrels, Wishop watched several long weapon crates full of crossbows, bolts, glaives, poleaxes, and spears set on board.

You might consider joining a writers group or writing forum and take advantage of the free proof reading and critical advice and suggestions of the other members.


Cheers: Jaq